In order to improve my paper, I believe it must be continually revised, as any paper should be. I believe that each sentence of an essay should carry itself seamlessly among the rest. The flow that a paragraph has, has the ability to further the point that is being made. With this in mind, I plan to set a structure and main topic for each paragraph while ensuring that there is not much fluff in between actual context. It is crucial to also minimize local errors, however that can be solved with each revision. Something else I need to pay attention to is the general layout of the essay. I am currently realizing that I need to break free of old methods of writing that I have learned from past classes. Older methods can absolutely be utilized in a positive direction, but they also can be restraining. It can prove difficult to break free from the chains of old writing styles. My goal is to be able to express my thoughts more freely. As for the actual context of my paper, I intend to head in the direction of the scientific aspect of beauty. I will explore facts behind why humans find each other attractive to the psychological reasons we find beauty in inanimate objects.
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